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Screams In There!

October 27, 2013
Screams in there! From layers of pain
Between the layers, love is slain,
Memories slosh, enter if you dare,
Slimy and stark, stop a bloody stare,
Past is the past, don’t ask, such distain.

Noise all the noise, no snaps remain
Ears ring, no song, no dance, not sane? 
Calmly inane you act like you don’t care
Screams In There!
Has been months, try to complain?

Sly peaking, a menace; he is inhumane,
emotions vanish midair, Is she fair?
A door opens; to escape his snare.
You are plain, no life in fast lane!
Screams In There!
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From → dearheart, Rondeau

6 Comments
  1. Nice rondeau poem ~ A challenge to write one with all the rhyming words ~

    My favorite part is the opening lines:

    Screams in there! From layers of pain
    Between the layers, love is slain,

  2. ha. nice. i like all the sound and noise in the second part…
    got to be careful tangoeing with the past as well…
    relationships can get messy too

  3. Very cool! Spookily cool.

  4. oh heck… life and love can get pretty messy and painful at times… the screams repetition work well..

  5. I could relate 😉 Nicely done!

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